WOW this is old, and still unfinished...
You know you're a pathetic artist when you find yourself digging up old unfinished projects and posting them.
I liked where this was going, however I think for me to finish it, I'd start all over. New poses, new designs, everything. Might keep the sky, Like what the sky was doin'.
I've got another John Carter of Mars inspired piece somewhere that hails back to when I did this one, I'll have to continue in my pathetic-ness and post it here soon also.